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Tips for ‘Righting’ Copy



Many of my marketing duties lie in the traditional realm. This inevitably involves creating copy for direct mail shots; advertisements and the ‘usual’ channels. While many marketing managers don’t get involved in the creation of such material, a small department means my sleeves are permanently rolled-up.

Occasionally however, I have the luxury of being presented with material and donning the editing hat.  Being on both sides of the fence has given me a unique perspective and taught me a great deal.  Here are a few tips that may help you get that perfect brief and a quick turn-around, particularly when faced with a daunting deadline:

You’re first draft is the most important

It’s the initial thoughts and creative juices that are the most important.  If you go back to butcher your first creation you’ll create an almost ‘design by committee’ feel i.e. a mish-mash of concepts and points with no one theme being prevalent.  Take the time, even when it’s of the essence, to sit back and think about the purpose and delivery of your message.

Less is more

People don’t have the time to read paragraphs.  Make sure your copy is snappy and don’t be afraid to use alliteration, bullet points and images.  Its paper, not a field – not every corner and square centimetre has to be used.  White space is a great way to make impact.

Find a proofer

Never proof read your own work.  You know it off by heart so your eyes are most likely not going to pick up on mistakes.  Find a colleague who can read your copy for two reasons:

  1. so it minimises mistakes before you send it off to get a designed draft back etc. and
  2. to see if they get the message you are trying to get across.

Include others

Finally, this is a very important point that could save your sanity.  If your superiors are the kind of people that love to continually change tit for tat on copy and you find yourself getting disillusioned on the walk back to the drawing board, involve them from the start! Trust me – the greatest way to get buy-in for an idea is to ensure the powers that be feel they were every bit as involved in the crafted message as you were!

Have you advice for the everyday writer? Let us know!

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  • http://www.tweakyourbiz.com Niall Devitt

    Great tips, Connor! Thanks for sharing. I really like your advice around involving people from the start. This strikes me as a great way to ensure that people feel ownership and ultimately probably means that the copy is better in any case. :)

  • Connor Keppel

    Thanks Niall – good to hear you enjoyed!

  • http://twitter.com/beatricewhelan Beatrice Whelan

    Great tips Conor. I would add a tip to use the Plain English Guidelines http://www.nala.ie/catalog/plain-english-guidelines-glance . It helps make copy so much more readable for everyone.

  • Connor Keppel

    Hi Beatrice – thanks for that.  Good to know

  • http://twitter.com/Denis_Cody Denis Cody

    Connor, take your own advice! You should have used a “proofer” …. “It’s the initial thoughts ” vs. “Its paper” and “You’re first draft” – did you mean “Your first draft …”?

  • http://twitter.com/GetVetter Vetter

    What you wrote makes sense Connor. I’ve found visualizing your reader, giving them a name and finding a photo on Flickr to represent them helps me.

  • Elishbul

    Thanks for the input Niall. I also suspect The subtext in some of the discussions over this issue lies in the emergence of the “tiger” economies in the far east and southeast Asian region. It can give you an insight into how their business leaders attitudes, worker ethic and the stance taken by some governments in the region too. Perhaps understanding Foreign attitudes and demystifying them in this context, makes it less alien and stops us from being too judgemental.

  • http://twitter.com/#!/antonmccarthy Anton McCarthy

    Hi Elish,

    Enjoyed this one! It’s funny, as I started out reading the first couple of paragraphs, I immediately though of the 10,000 rule, and then you mentioned it!! I think that ‘if at first you don’t succeed, try and try again’ is a good corollary to that principle. I think that in our fast-paced, ‘want it now’ Western culture, it’s easy to miss the point that people don’t excel on natural ability alone, and that hard work and persistence over a prolonged period is what really gets you to where you want to be.

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    If you have unambiguous plan then it becomes easy to achieve your goals efficiently and on time. But to make your plan clear you have to work on it and have to evaluate and analyze each point. By making list of all these main points it becomes easy to understand the requirements of your business and adopt the changes for improvement.

  • ElliStGeorgeGodfrey

     Thank you for your comment! It’s worth setting up regular reviews, maybe more than once a year to see if the overall strategy is appropriate and, as you pointed out, adopt any changes.

  • ElliStGeorgeGodfrey

     Warren,

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     Debi,

    It does become more real when you are putting it in writing. One thing I didn’t put in the post but has a profound impact on business owners and their teams is that the act of writing your strategic plan is an act of taking your business seriously and responsibly. It elevates the level of sophistication of you, your team and your business!